Write Your Way Into University
How to crack the personal statement
Elaine Millward
This article includes valuable information on writing a personal statement
for university admission-- with impact. Please read our personal
statement writing guide for more information and access our sample
personal statements. The Get Into Uni personal statement writing guide contains
systematic instructions on the techniques to help increase the odds of your
application, however this article contains a short guide to writing your way
into university. For most potential students there are some clear reasons why
they wish to embark on university. The single best reason is that the subject
area fascinates the reader. This article will offer insight into how you should
approach your personal statement.
One of the typical complaints of Admission Officers is that student personal
statements all seem the same; unfortunately, students normally read a number
of sample statements on the internet and automatically write a typical personal
statement from the range of available sample personal statements found on websites.
It is important to put yourself in the shoes of the admissions officer: why
would your application be unique, how are you different from the other candidates?
Primarily you need to decide how you will divide your personal statement into
digestible chucks. The most obvious way is to divide into paragraphs of 100
words. If you aim for between 500 and 600 words at most, it will help your admission
officer when they have to read thousands of personal statements to find the
perfect student.
So let's take a look at the way your personal statement should be structured?
If you spent, time analysing our sample personal statements you will see that
each paragraph revolves around one particular incident or the subject area of
study. Although the personal statement should logically flow from start to finish,
none the less, unlike a book with a distinctive story running through it and
building up to a climax, a personal statement is episodic in style and content
so that each paragraph stands out.
In planning your paragraphs, you must give the admissions officer a glow so
they will wish to continue the next section. To illustrate the structure, let's
take a look at the typical personal statement organisation. The first paragraph
will need to be an exciting and dynamic narrative to capture the readers attention,
the subsequent paragraphs should outline why you wish to study for your particular
field followed by a compelling powerful final paragraph with strong action verbs
to give your reader the final push to admit you.
You may find it helpful to prepare a brief synopsis or outline of the way you
see your personal statement developing. It doesn't have to be very long or detailed
and, like most personal statements outlines, you do not have to stick to it
if, as you go along, you find a better route for your journey. Keep it simple
and let it serve merely as a quick reminder of where you're going. It might
run like this: First memory - seeing my new baby brother in my mother's arms.
Nursing experience - volunteer in residential nursing home. Visiting the baby
clinic - desires to become a midwife sufficed. Goals for the future - career
ambitions.
It is important to cover whatever period you intend to include in your personal
statement because time spent planning your sequence and the method you feel
happiest with will undoubtedly make the actual writing that much easier for
you.
The biggest problem you will find is finding the topics of discussion in your
personal statement and selecting those topics you want to use and which topics
you wish to leave out. Remember that with any form of writing you are practicing
the art form. Get Into Uni Oxford Educated editors edit the personal statements
for our customers. A while ago, I was asked to take a critical look at a personal
statement which spanned the students life from age two to eighteen and it made
gripping reading but was far too long and the student had not been selective
enough in the abundance of material she choose from. The word count ran to 1,500
words - far too long for a personal statement. The task of reducing your personal
statement can be enthusiastically undertaken but the problem is that you need
to look at your original brainstormed ideas to organise your material for the
selection process. The only criterion you need to apply at this stage is this
incident of sufficient interest to the admission officer.
I hope that you agree a powerful beginning is of paramount importance or we
will quickly lose the Admission Officers interest. Then, once having captured
his or hers attention, we have to make sure your personal statement ending is
dynamic and in the right place. Each paragraph should be pleasing to the reader
and you need to write a natural conclusion. Chekhov once said that the essence
of good style is simplicity. The best advice is therefore, to keep it simple.
Get Into Uni offers students personal statement editing and tips on how you
can get an edge over the competition when applying for university. The website
includes sample personal statements, a free writing guide, and
End Note:
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